Kellerman looked at the huge, carved head in awe. A whole gamut of questions flowed through his mind, the first and most important being who had carved the giant edifice and what did it represent? It could have been a dog, perhaps a stylised vision of it’s creators or even more intriguingly a true to life portrait. The only way to get any answers was to don his safety suit, and take a ride in the exploration module to have a much closer look. Despite some trepidation he knew that this is what they had sent him here to do, although finding evidence of other life forms had not been on the agenda.What alarmed him was the absence of any clearance from the control base. The last vicious lightning storm had closed down any possibility of microwave communication in the foreseeable future. Yet this was an opportunity that could not be missed, the thing had appeared undetected overnight and could easily disappear in the same short timespan. There was no point in waiting he thought, let’s get on with it. He walked through to the robing room and started to don his life support and survival suit, ready to embark on what could turn out to be the most momentous day in his and the whole of martiankind’s history.
Sue Vincent’s weekly #Writephoto Waiting
Filed under Alternative history, Flash fiction, Otherworldly, Self compositions
What happened next? 🙂 Btw, may I make a small suggestion? It gets difficult to read such a long paragraph in terms of eye movements. Breaking it down into shorter paragraphs(based on your creative call of course) will just make the read smoother.
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Thanks for this, I appreciate any comments that will help me improve my craft.
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I agree with Anurag… but loved the glimpse into the tale…
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