September 3, 2018 · 5:47 pm
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RonovanWrites Weekly Haiku Poetry Prompt Challenge #217 Poison&Past

The poison bottle

held memories of her past

trying not to smile

 

 

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Filed under As you read it, Haiku, Self compositions

6 responses to “RonovanWrites Weekly Haiku Poetry Prompt Challenge #217 Poison&Past”

  1. Pat B
    September 4, 2018 at 5:46 am

    Her past leaves much to be imagined.

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  2. PrairieChat
    September 4, 2018 at 2:37 pm

    A dark Haiku. Is she the poisoner or the poisoney

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  3. kitwilford
    September 8, 2018 at 3:44 am

    I really like the tone. This is one of those poems that stays with you.

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  4. kitwilford
    September 8, 2018 at 3:46 am

    It reminded me of something. I realized it as soon as I left your page. I came back to tell you I know what it is: an old 1940’s film noir.

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