Sue Vincent’s weekly challenge #writephoto #Aflame

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After four hours of half-running, mainly stumbling, over the rough ground we allowed ourselves to rest. Karen placed her rucksack on one of the many granite rocks strewn over the hillside and started to rifle through it. Her fingers feverish, her gaze intense. The marks of recent tears etched on her soot and earth-stained cheeks. Occasionally she would look over to the West where the late evening sun had set the heavens aglow. It wasn’t the crimson streaked golden glow of the sun that worried us. It was the impetus given to the spectacle by the raging fires from which we were escaping. I wanted to put my arms around her, tell her everything was all right but we both knew it would be a lie. Everyone’s homes were in ruins, razed to the ground. Whole families erased or trapped helpless in the area of devastation. It was only by sheer luck we had managed to escape. We had seen no other persons in our flight; surmising on the possibility that we may ave been the only ones left. All we knew was that we had to keep on moving, get as far away as possible and then try to find if there were any more survivors of the catastrophic onslaught. But I only knew that if we didn’t rest now, take stock of the situation and plan our strategy there could be no tomorrow to hope for.

 

 

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Filed under Alternative history, As you read it, dystopian view, Flash fiction, Self compositions

6 responses to “Sue Vincent’s weekly challenge #writephoto #Aflame

  1. Nice, Bobby. This prompt has certainly brought out everyone’s fears.

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  2. A desperate situation, Bobby.
    (And yes, I chose this sunset as it can be read many ways 😉 )

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  3. I can only think of the Paradise fire. Vivid storytelling.

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  4. Pingback: Photo prompt round-up: Aflame #writephoto | Sue Vincent's Daily Echo

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