Crimson’s Creative Challenge #21 #Tanka -Quarry


Full green surrounded,

each shaded bank, where moss-lined,

torpid waters lap,

twilight stirring, surfaces

from below, an ancient carp





Filed under nature inspired, On the lines of romance, Otherworldly, Self compositions, Tanka

3 responses to “Crimson’s Creative Challenge #21 #Tanka -Quarry

  1. You’ve really captured that one. And perhaps there is a carp in there; it does lie quite close to a fishery and I have seen trout in the nearby river.


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