Crimson’s Creative Challenge #206 #Old faithful

I looked up to the sign and thought fancy that

someone has left an old straw hat

I wonder if the sun got in their eyes

and that was when they realised

the protection they’d enjoyed for so long

after all this time was sadly gone

and after they had a think about it

decided they would carry on without it


Filed under Self compositions

2 responses to “Crimson’s Creative Challenge #206 #Old faithful

  1. Pingback: Crimson’s Creative Challenge # 206 | When the pen takes control.

  2. I like this. Got good rhythm, and a good tale 😊

    Liked by 1 person

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