Crimson’s Creative Challenge #240 #Mirage

For as we stood gazing across the bay

truly my breath was snatched away

appearing into this tranquil scene

upon the sea surface was a submarine

yet so like no other craft I’d seen

this was some castle from a dream,

of conning tower, not one but two

to give the Captain all round view

and while these boats are black as night

this one was painted all over white

and while I watched from on the shore

she slipped beneath the waves once more.

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One response to “Crimson’s Creative Challenge #240 #Mirage

  1. Excellent. In all respects. Makes me smile at the unexpected twist you’ve given it. And I can see it, too

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