Air smelling of stars,
sea breeze playfully tempting
the shy smiling crabs
to scuttle over smooth sands
and bathe in a purple sea
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Thursday photo prompt: Clarity #writephoto
Filed under nature inspired, On the lines of romance, Self compositions, Tanka
Beautiful, Bobby…especially the image raised by that first line.
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Yeah thanks, a good first line can hide a lot of errors
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Nothing wrong with the rest of it as far as I can see.
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Like that. But smiling crabs? 🙂
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Every crab appears to have a smiling face don’t you think?
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I’ve never considered it before. But … yes.
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