Crimson’s Creative Challenge #155

When we took a ride on the big wheel

I was hoping to cop a feel

but it didn’t take long for me to see

the earth below and its beauty

when I said this to my girlfriend

she said our relationship should end

for saying no to me was just a game

and things could never be the same

I must admit I was taken aback

and said give me the fare money back

she said you can go to hell

so I’m left frustrated and poor as well

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Filed under Comic verse, On the lines of romance, Self compositions

One response to “Crimson’s Creative Challenge #155

  1. Fun. As any ride on the Big Wheel should be

    Liked by 1 person

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